- I came across this image from one of followers on Twitter who tweeted how creative any viewers can be with writing a poem about the above image. I gave it a try but was stuck on where I was heading with it, but eventually came up with one and I hope you like it. Leave a comment if you feel the need too. Peace
An infinite onslaught of hands
Began to swarm and asphyxiate his every exclamation for help
His last meal smothered with an unfortunate deliverance of angry bitterness,
Every hand impairing his sight
While pulling back his thoughts from manifesting,
In the midst of the excruciating pain, the thought of his revenge lingered throughout
every bullet that were crafted by his enemies,
This would be the siren for his demise,
He began with a broken life but after getting
the taste of the fast life he had no intentions of slowing down
Until this very moment,
Attempting to desperately plea for why his life should be spared,
A handful impending afterlife that he perceived to be his judge, jury, and executioner,
Missed calls by his older sister filled his phones call log,
Unable to listen due to his ears
being plugged by the barrage of crawling fingers,
Fighting to withstand fading into oblivion
On the verge of flat lining into the crossroads,
As the hands of the surgeons release the tension of his dying thoughts
“Call it in” one of the trauma surgeons said, because the time has arrived
When the stench of death taints everything we do or say,
The sowing and the reaping,
a two sided coin in the tossing.
A great & fateful reminder.
Wonderful writing.
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I appreciate the feedback. Thank you for reading.
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Great piece! But I think your comment tag is in the wrong place.
it was hard to find, you might want to put it down by the bottom of the story which is easier to find since you just finished it. π
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Thanks for the feedback and reading, and I’m not sure what you mean by “your comment tag” do you mean finding me through categories on WordPress or finding me on Twitter?
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Very nice, indeed. π
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I appreciate that, thanks for reading and the follow.
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